Showing posts with label Lauren Vyse Ella Stewart and Aggie Andrews. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Lauren Vyse Ella Stewart and Aggie Andrews. Show all posts

Monday, 14 March 2011

Final Thriller Film

Our thriller film is now finished. In order to complete the film from it's last stage, we took on board the comments that our fellow peers put to us. They said that we needed to make our title sequences longer and also we needed to make the lighting in our clips darker in order to provide a more eery feel so that it would add to the thriller conventions. We also had to change the music so that the beat kicked it when the girls body is displayed on the screen. Another constructive criticism that we got was that the title clip for our fill, Rake, was in the wrong position and that the colour and font weren't appropriate. We then researched some better, more effective fonts and changed the background colour to black and the font colour to white. This made the title page stand out and look more like a thriller film. After changing these minor problems, our film was complete.

Thursday, 10 March 2011

Plan of action

Taking points from our feedback, to improve our opening sequence we could:
  • Make our credits longer
  • Change the order of the shots to make it more chronological
  • Vary the lighting used to create more of an atmosphere
  • Make our music fit our images precisely 

Feedback for our roughcut

EDITING:
  • Smooth editing
  • Effective use of black and white and flickering motions.
  • Could be slightly more chronological
SOUND:
  • Very good use of sound effects on the production logo
  • The drums could create more effect if they came in when the first shot of the girl is shown
CAMERAWORK:
  • Point of view shots of characters
  • Canted angle created sense of distortion
  • Good use of varied shots and techniques eg panning, and used effectively creating mystery of characters and themes
MISE-EN-SCENE:
  • Location, props and clothes all link together.
  • No shot showing us the location before hand
  • Male character seemed to have no understanding of why he was using his prop
  • Lighting was all one tone, could have varied this a bit more to create more of a mood and atmosphere
TITLES
  • Credits were good, great use of font and effects
  • Could of lasted longer
THRILLER CONVENTIONS:
  • Based around a murder which fits well with a thriller 

Thursday, 27 January 2011

Our final Idea

The sub genre of our film is going to be a crime thriller, the overall narrative of our film would be about two farmers that find a body whilst harvesting their fields.
The characters in our film would be two male farmers with their dogs, we would use dogs as they would be the first to discover the body and this enables us to use diegetic sound of the dogs barking.
The location of our filming would be in a deserted feild in one of our nearby villages, this is to show an erry atmosphere.
The lighting of the sequence will be dull to show a more gloomy atmosphere, and to make it more realistic so it reflects every day farming lifestyle.
We or the actors we will be using will be dressed in the streotypical farming manor, so it is clear to the audience what characters we are trying to portray. The costumes will consist of items such as , wellies, hats, checkered shirts and dungerees.
The chosen tittle of our film will be
There would be a non diegetic soundtrack towards the end of the sequence when the body is discovered this would correlate with the editing as it would be fast paced to build tension making the audience aware that something will happen.
Our editing will be contiunous throughout except from when there is the scene where they found the body , in this part of the scene it will be montage editing produce an exciting atmosphere.


Who was going to be in charge of organising props?
We will all share the duty of organising props
Did we need permission to film in the fields?
We replied, no we don't need permission to film in the fields,
because they're not private property.
What filming shots will you use? 
We will use a few techniques of camera shots, these shots will consist of close ups , establishing shot 
and a canted angle shot.
When do you intend to film?
We intend to film during a weekend. This is because it will be easier for us to get together as we live in different areas and we will have long time periods to do our filming. The date that we will be filming on 12th Febuary.
What equipment will we need?
We'll need, a camera, a tripod, farming cosutmes and simplistic farming props.