Feedback for our roughcut

EDITING:

• Smooth editing
• Effective use of black and white and flickering motions.
• Could be slightly more chronological

SOUND:

• Very good use of sound effects on the production logo
• The drums could create more effect if they came in when the first shot of the girl is shown

CAMERAWORK:

• Point of view shots of characters
• Canted angle created sense of distortion
• Good use of varied shots and techniques eg panning, and used effectively creating mystery of characters and themes

MISE-EN-SCENE:

• Location, props and clothes all link together.
• No shot showing us the location before hand
• Male character seemed to have no understanding of why he was using his prop
• Lighting was all one tone, could have varied this a bit more to create more of a mood and atmosphere

TITLES

• Credits were good, great use of font and effects
• Could of lasted longer

THRILLER CONVENTIONS:

• Based around a murder which fits well with a thriller